Comic Project Cover

Drawing \ Uncategorized | 03/07/08 @837 | Daviash | critiques (7) | views (329)

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Hello here i go again, after a while absent.This is the comic cover of our project. I made this using Dal Bello´s drawing as base, and then i let it grows from there.Critics and Comments are always welcome i hope everyone like it.

Thanks

AE estou por aqui denovo, depois de um tempo ausente.Essa é a capa do nosso projeto.Eu fiz usando o desenho original do Dal Bello como base e aos poucos eu deixei crescer e desenvolver a imagem dai.Criticas e comentarios são sempre bem vindos, e espero que todos curtam.

Obrigado

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Roadrunner

03/07/08 @880

Very cool. I like the colours and the smoke.
Not sure about anatomy, the face looks longish. See what the experts say.

I'd give some more space from the right.

Daviash

03/07/08 @906

Thank you for your comment Roadrunner, i agree with you about the composition, even being proposital, the anatomy it is my first time so its really possible that have some mistakes i only hope that those issues do not compromise the work.thank you so much for your coment an voting! =]

Redredwine

03/09/08 @136

I think a little more work around the left eye (his right) would be good. Some shading there because it looks like the eyes are somewhat deepset (Space between eyebrow and eye is narrow). This will "shorten" his face somewhat and should look more natural. Good work with color.

twistoflime

03/09/08 @636

I like the lighting and how you've cropped the photo. Good job on the hair and his expression. It is the nose which bothers me most. It seems extremely skinny and long. The space above the lips seems overly long. I also think you should reexamine the areas of sharpness and blur. You have background grass that's in focus, but the jacket and cig are out of focus along with the lower 2/3 of his face. Hair is sharp yet the ear is not.

capjames

03/10/08 @839

Amazing work! ;D

(Just the same critiques you already know... nothing so serious)

Madanapale

03/11/08 @038

Nice colors...The face proportions can be improved.
Carlos

Daviash

03/11/08 @745

Thanks everyone, i hope i can get better with time.Thnaks again

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